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Well, well, look what we have here! A future protagonist in the making! Alright, let's get down to it.

Vision: I like the bright light purple lights portrayed in this picture. Perhaps the character you created has custom-built wings? Four and-a-half stars.
Originality: There's quite a bit of originality in this, but considering this was inspired by things like Yu-Gi-Oh! and Tron, I can't rate this too highly. Four stars.
Technique: Dare I ask how long it took you to do this? Dare I say that you took your time in doing this and did it right? Four and-a-half stars.
Impact: Your ability to capture an audience and keep their attention impresses me to a point. I think if you really ramp it up a little more, you will have your day in the sun. Four stars.

Overall, I think that with some slight improvements you will succeed as an artist. I have utmost faith in you, and I know that as long as you take your time, things will start coming your way.




Critiqued by Kevin 'The Skull' Anderson

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